Thursday 20 November 2008

My nan

This is a poem i wrote in my creative writing class describing my Nan. Shes not with us anymore but she is always in my thoughts and i love her loads and loads and always will. Love you Nanny xxxxx
If this person was a tree, she would be just beginning to blossom all dotted with pink and white just as the cardy she wrapped around her neck or the blanket that lay across her knees.
If this person was a building, she would be a huge castle, a bouncy one like i used to jump in when i was three.
If she were food she would be cakes, ice cream, jam and honey. Everything sweet to rot your teeth.
If she was a time of day she would be bedtime with a cup of hot coco and a story to tell.
If she were an item of clothing she'd be a woolly jumper that had been knitted far too big so i could wrap it all around me like the cuddles she once gave.
If this person was music she would be pleasant and soothing.
If this person was weather theres no doubt about it she would simply be the sun.

2 comments:

LYN said...

aww.. that was beautiful!

Lainey Laine said...

Awwwwwww Lisa. I love it - Im lucky coz you read it to me! I love my Nan too and I miss her too so so much. My Nan died about 15 years ago and I still miss her. Was lovely to see you on Wednesday hunni. Love Laine xx
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